Steal from the best ever ending...kind of??
Last scene, after a bodacious Ninja/Latino/Yiddish dance sequence
Kevin- Don't you see Erwin, Citizen pain would just be the start. Together we can bring new life into the action movie scene.
Erwin- Genre Kevin, the action movie genre.
K- It will be the perfect match-
E- -Kevin
K- -no just listen, my talent with your skills as a-
E- -KEVIN
K- -as a Master producer and your amazing family connections in the business-
E- Kevin, you need to listen to me.
K- What?
E- I'm not Jerry Bruckheimer. He's not even a cousin.
K- crestfallen
Well nobodies perfect.
the end
.....er possibly not as funny as it seemed in the shower this morning!
Last scene, after a bodacious Ninja/Latino/Yiddish dance sequence
Kevin- Don't you see Erwin, Citizen pain would just be the start. Together we can bring new life into the action movie scene.
Erwin- Genre Kevin, the action movie genre.
K- It will be the perfect match-
E- -Kevin
K- -no just listen, my talent with your skills as a-
E- -KEVIN
K- -as a Master producer and your amazing family connections in the business-
E- Kevin, you need to listen to me.
K- What?
E- I'm not Jerry Bruckheimer. He's not even a cousin.
K- crestfallen
Well nobodies perfect.
the end
.....er possibly not as funny as it seemed in the shower this morning!

2 Comments:
Like the concept of unmasking Erwin, but we should give him the chance to redeem himself - could be the plot driver for act 2..
yeah, need to think about it more,
we'll need to map out where we want to get to by the end of act two
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