Friday, January 12, 2007

Steal from the best ever ending...kind of??

Last scene, after a bodacious Ninja/Latino/Yiddish dance sequence

Kevin- Don't you see Erwin, Citizen pain would just be the start. Together we can bring new life into the action movie scene.

Erwin- Genre Kevin, the action movie genre.

K- It will be the perfect match-

E- -Kevin

K- -no just listen, my talent with your skills as a-

E- -KEVIN

K- -as a Master producer and your amazing family connections in the business-

E- Kevin, you need to listen to me.

K- What?

E- I'm not Jerry Bruckheimer. He's not even a cousin.

K- crestfallen


Well nobodies perfect.


the end



.....er possibly not as funny as it seemed in the shower this morning!

2 Comments:

Blogger Mike said...

Like the concept of unmasking Erwin, but we should give him the chance to redeem himself - could be the plot driver for act 2..

8:02 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

yeah, need to think about it more,
we'll need to map out where we want to get to by the end of act two

7:53 AM  

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